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2019年11月07日 04:50

【<】【p】【>】【清】【幽】【,】【是】【竹】【的】【一】【大】【特】【点】【。】【否】【则】【,】【何】【来】【的】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【幽】【竹】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【一】【词】【呢】【?】【爱】【竹】【的】【君】【子】【更】【喜】【爱】【竹】【林】【。】【竹】【林】【有】【一】【种】【深】【幽】【的】【环】【境】【。】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【走】【到】【竹】【林】【里】【,】【心】【中】【还】【会】【有】【多】【少】【烦】【恼】【?】【恐】【怕】【也】【只】【有】【心】【静】【如】【水】【了】【吧】【!】【这】【种】【朴】【素】【的】【美】【,】【已】【深】【透】【吾】【心】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【远】【处】【传】【来】【一】【群】【孩】【子】【的】【欢】【笑】【声】【,】【原】【来】【是】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【广】【场】【上】【疯】【狂】【地】【追】【逐】【着】【、】【打】【闹】【着】【,】【正】【在】【放】【风】【筝】【,】【风】【筝】【乘】【着】【秋】【风】【,】【越】【飞】【越】【高】【,】【自】【由】【自】【在】【,】【好】【像】【在】【说】【,】【这】【真】【是】【放】【风】【筝】【的】【好】【季】【节】【啊】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】商都网bbs【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【仿】【词】【练】【句】【,】【过】【好】【语】【言】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【要】【用】【词】【造】【句】【灵】【活】【、】【准】【确】【,】【语】【句】【通】【顺】【,】【表】【意】【清】【楚】【明】【白】【,】【要】【让】【人】【家】【一】【读】【起】【来】【就】【说】【,】【嗨】【,】【这】【个】【同】【学】【的】【用】【词】【造】【句】【还】【真】【不】【赖】【啦】【,】【顺】【顺】【溜】【溜】【的】【,】【既】【读】【来】【上】【口】【,】【又】【具】【有】【表】【现】【力】【。】【可】【是】【,】【事】【实】【上】【并】【非】【如】【此】【,】【我】【们】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【语】【言】【并】【没】【有】【真】【正】【过】【关】【,】【要】【么】【句】【子】【不】【通】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【要】【么】【是】【虽】【然】【通】【顺】【但】【又】【生】【硬】【、】【枯】【燥】【。】【请】【比】【较】【阅】【读】【下】【列】【两】【个】【语】【段】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【悄】【悄】【地】【出】【现】【,】【又】【悄】【悄】【地】【隐】【去】【。】【她】【在】【我】【熟】【睡】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【张】【扬】【的】【躯】【体】【以】【温】【暖】【;】【她】【在】【我】【惆】【怅】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【迷】【惘】【的】【心】【灵】【以】【慰】【藉】【;】【她】【在】【我】【快】【乐】【时】【默】【默】【地】【与】【我】【分】【享】【;】【她】【在】【我】【悲】【伤】【时】【执】【著】【地】【选】【择】【与】【我】【同】【行】【。】【她】【的】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【鞭】【笞】【着】【我】【行】【动】【的】【张】【狂】【,】【抚】【慰】【着】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【创】【伤】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【空】【气】【漫】【天】【,】【风】【沙】【干】【燥】【的】【下】【午】【,】【来】【你】【到】【王】【府】【井】【步】【行】【街】【,】【古】【希】【奇】【怪】【的】【人】【们】【你】【身】【边】【走】【过】【,】【有】【道】【士】【、】【有】【和】【尚】【、】【有】【老】【外】【、】【有】【H】【I】【P】【青】【年】【也】【有】【板】【儿】【爷】【,】【他】【们】【走】【在】【街】【上】【,】【走】【在】【寂】【静】【,】【而】【阴】【一】【会】【排】【成】【一】【个】【字】【,】【一】【会】【排】【成】【人】【个】【字】【,】【内】【酷】【到】【家】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【段】【文】【字】【是】【一】【篇】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【母】【爱】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【生】【动】【优】【美】【的】【遣】【词】【造】【句】【,】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【妙】【用】【,】【极】【大】【地】【显】【示】【出】【母】【爱】【的】【张】【力】【、】【母】【爱】【的】【博】【大】【和】【温】【馨】【。】【第】【二】【段】【文】【字】【是】【2】【0】【0】【6】【年】【中】【考】【北】【京】【卷】【零】【分】【作】【文】【《】【北】【京】【的】【符】【号】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【你】【读】【了】【其】【语】【句】【简】【直】【不】【知】【其】【所】【云】【,】【随】【便】【乱】【用】【词】【语】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【真】【是】【让】【人】【不】【忍】【卒】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【判】【断】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【优】【劣】【,】【首】【先】【就】【能】【从】【你】【读】【的】【语】【言】【句】【子】【上】【感】【觉】【出】【来】【,】【是】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【往】【往】【是】【非】【常】【准】【确】【的】【,】【一】【读】【就】【知】【道】【你】【的】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【是】【可】【以】【习】【得】【的】【,】【这】【要】【求】【我】【们】【平】【时】【要】【坚】【持】【长】【期】【的】【、】【大】【量】【的】【阅】【读】【训】【练】【。】【只】【有】【平】【时】【大】【量】【地】【读】【人】【家】【的】【好】【文】【章】【,】【学】【习】【其】【中】【的】【优】【美】【的】【词】【句】【、】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【有】【意】【去】【模】【仿】【、】【训】【练】【,】【方】【能】【有】【所】【成】【效】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【提】【纲】【挈】【领】【,】【过】【好】【立】【意】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【审】【题】【立】【意】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【最】【重】【要】【的】【一】【步】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【不】【审】【题】【,】【也】【不】【立】【意】【,】【喜】【欢】【想】【一】【句】【写】【一】【句】【,】【就】【像】【挤】【牙】【膏】【似】【的】【,】【这】【是】【写】【不】【好】【作】【文】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【必】【须】【先】【花】【点】【时】【间】【去】【审】【题】【,】【去】【列】【提】【纲】【,】【去】【立】【意】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【磨】【刀】【不】【误】【砍】【柴】【工】【。】【但】【一】【旦】【这】【个】【步】【骤】【完】【成】【了】【,】【作】【文】【就】【能】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【,】【不】【但】【能】【确】【保】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【,】【而】【且】【还】【有】【可】【能】【更】【节】【省】【时】【间】【。】【如】【有】【篇】【《】【化】【蝶】【飞】【》】【的】【佳】【作】【是】【这】【样】【立】【意】【和】【列】【提】【纲】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【旨】【:】【在】【危】【机】【四】【伏】【中】【安】【于】【现】【状】【,】【那】【必】【定】【是】【死】【亡】【;】【只】【有】【不】【断】【地】【挑】【战】【危】【机】【,】【才】【能】【走】【向】【光】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【纲】【:】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【化】【蝶】【飞】【翔】【的】【过】【程】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【着】【重】【描】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【蜕】【化】【经】【过】【,】【蚕】【茧】【在】【蜕】【化】【过】【程】【中】【的】【心】【理】【等】【等】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【采】【用】【生】【动】【的】【描】【摹】【,】【细】【腻】【的】【刻】【画】【,】【来】【展】【现】【蚕】【茧】【的】【战】【胜】【黑】【暗】【的】【勇】【气】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【使】【之】【能】【够】【充】【分】【地】【传】【达】【出】【上】【述】【清】【晰】【的】【主】【题】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【追】【求】【委】【婉】【含】【蓄】【,】【又】【必】【须】【中】【心】【明】【确】【,】【主】【旨】【显】【豁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【中】【考】【贵】【州】【遵】【义】【一】【考】【生】【写】【的】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【可】【见】【,】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【审】【题】【、】【立】【意】【这】【一】【关】【,】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【过】【好】【拟】【题】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【考】【试】【作】【文】【,】【大】【多】【是】【材】【料】【作】【文】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【等】【,】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【拟】【题】【的】【。】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【,】【首】【先】【就】【会】【在】【拟】【题】【上】【体】【现】【出】【来】【。】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【内】【容】【的】【作】【文】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【好】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【差】【,】【最】【后】【得】【分】【会】【有】【很】【大】【的】【差】【距】【,】【这】【一】【点】【在】【本】【人】【的】【多】【次】【中】【考】【阅】【卷】【经】【历】【中】【得】【到】【了】【证】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【写】【“】【世】【间】【有】【很】【多】【规】【矩】【,】【有】【很】【多】【条】【条】【框】【框】【,】【有】【很】【多】【‘】【绳】【索】【’】【在】【束】【缚】【着】【人】【们】【,】【特】【别】【是】【束】【缚】【着】【学】【生】【”】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【我】【被】【束】【缚】【着】【》】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【半】【个】【我】【》】【,】【结】【果】【两】【文】【得】【分】【相】【差】【1】【5】【分】【之】【多】【。】【很】【明】【显】【,】【前】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【非】【常】【一】【般】【,】【而】【后】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【则】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【。】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【因】【为】【作】【者】【形】【象】【地】【揭】【示】【出】【规】【矩】【呀】【,】【条】【条】【框】【框】【呀】【,】【简】【直】【把】【有】【个】【性】【的】【“】【长】【方】【形】【”】【的】【“】【我】【”】【,】【硬】【给】【活】【生】【生】【地】【磨】【成】【了】【“】【圆】【”】【。】【成】【“】【圆】【”】【后】【的】【“】【我】【”】【不】【是】【完】【整】【的】【“】【我】【”】【了】【,】【而】【是】【只】【有】【“】【半】【个】【我】【”】【了】【。】【文】【章】【写】【来】【确】【实】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【、】【行】【文】【风】【趣】【而】【又】【启】【人】【遐】【思】【。】【再】【加】【上】【板】【块】【式】【的】【结】【构】【,】【更】【使】【得】【文】【章】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【、】【论】【说】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【才】【能】【拟】【好】【题】【呢】【?】【方】【法】【很】【多】【,】【如】【采】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【借】【用】【、】【化】【用】【、】【引】【用】【、】【设】【问】【、】【反】【问】【、】【改】【造】【等】【等】【,】【都】【是】【不】【错】【的】【方】【法】【。】【但】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【无】【论】【采】【用】【什】【么】【方】【法】【拟】【题】【,】【都】【应】【该】【是】【立】【意】【在】【先】【,】【拟】【题】【在】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【,】【过】【好】【素】【材】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【作】【文】【是】【素】【材】【堆】【砌】【而】【成】【的】【,】【这】【话】【虽】【不】【完】【全】【对】【,】【但】【还】【是】【有】【一】【定】【道】【理】【的】【,】【因】【为】【作】【文】【的】【确】【是】【离】【不】【开】【素】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【作】【文】【不】【是】【堆】【砌】【素】【材】【,】【而】【是】【择】【取】【使】【用】【素】【材】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【式】【的】【使】【用】【素】【材】【。】【平】【时】【我】【们】【要】【求】【积】【累】【大】【量】【的】【素】【材】【,】【但】【真】【正】【写】【入】【作】【文】【的】【素】【材】【(】【题】【材】【)】【,】【也】【就】【那】【么】【一】【两】【则】【而】【已】【。】【为】【了】【能】【够】【用】【上】【这】【一】【两】【则】【的】【素】【材】【,】【你】【平】【时】【就】【必】【须】【大】【量】【地】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【,】【否】【则】【,】【到】【作】【文】【时】【你】【就】【很】【难】【择】【取】【到】【恰】【当】【的】【素】【材】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【有】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【这】【也】【是】【一】【种】【承】【诺】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【福】【建】【福】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【写】【重】【获】【原】【来】【的】【生】【活】【,】【不】【能】【止】【于】【口】【头】【、】【口】【号】【,】【而】【应】【该】【落】【实】【到】【具】【体】【实】【在】【的】【行】【动】【上】【,】【这】【才】【是】【一】【种】【真】【正】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【文】【章】【的】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【十】【分】【鲜】【明】【。】【为】【了】【阐】【述】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【作】【者】【只】【择】【取】【了】【一】【个】【新】【颖】【素】【材】【:】【“】【5】【·】【1】【2】【”】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【中】【,】【背】【亡】【妻】【的】【男】【子】【吴】【家】【芳】【。】【并】【具】【体】【围】【绕】【吴】【家】【芳】【再】【婚】【的】【行】【为】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【说】【来】【有】【理】【有】【据】【,】【令】【人】【信】【服】【。】【这】【个】【素】【材】【,】【看】【似】【随】【意】【,】【但】【一】【定】【是】【作】【者】【在】【大】【量】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【的】【素】【材】【中】【择】【取】【而】【来】【的】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【的】【结】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【过】【好】【感】【情】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【无】【论】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【、】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【还】【是】【平】【时】【作】【文】【,】【都】【特】【别】【看】【重】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【写】【浪】【漫】【式】【的】【,】【写】【幻】【想】【、】【想】【象】【式】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【不】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【只】【需】【要】【天】【马】【行】【空】【即】【可】【,】【这】【绝】【对】【是】【错】【误】【的】【认】【识】【。】【不】【管】【写】【什】【么】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【都】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【是】【奇】【幻】【、】【浪】【漫】【的】【吧】【,】【但】【你】【可】【曾】【知】【道】【,】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【表】【达】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【是】【极】【其】【真】【挚】【的】【:】【生】【活】【于】【社】【会】【底】【层】【的】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【受】【了】【辱】【,】【无】【法】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【,】【于】【是】【作】【者】【就】【替】【劳】【苦】【大】【众】【想】【象】【、】【设】【计】【出】【了】【一】【个】【无】【所】【不】【能】【的】【孙】【悟】【空】【来】【为】【广】【大】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【这】【种】【情】【愫】【是】【多】【么】【的】【真】【挚】【而】【朴】【素】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【清】【楚】【,】【并】【不】【是】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【真】【人】【真】【事】【,】【才】【能】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【无】【论】【写】【什】【么】【,】【都】【必】【须】【符】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【符】【合】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【符】【合】【社】【会】【、】【自】【然】【的】【发】【展】【规】【律】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【认】【识】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【…】【…】【这】【才】【叫】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【达】【到】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【你】【就】【必】【须】【观】【察】【生】【活】【、】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【用】【心】【思】【考】【。】【在】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【现】【象】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【涂】【抹】【上】【你】【自】【己】【的】【感】【情】【色】【彩】【,】【这】【才】【能】【真】【正】【过】【好】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【过】【好】【点】【题】【升】【华】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【要】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【,】【就】【像】【一】【个】【圆】【,】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【必】【须】【圆】【合】【,】【而】【不】【能】【像】【一】【条】【直】【线】【,】【产】【生】【两】【个】【相】【反】【方】【向】【上】【的】【端】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【刻】【意】【追】【求】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【篇】【篇】【圆】【合】【,】【但】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【遵】【循】【妙】【趣】【天】【成】【、】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【原】【则】【。】【只】【有】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【进】【行】【点】【题】【、】【升】【华】【,】【而】【离】【题】【、】【淡】【化】【、】【散】【化】【中】【心】【,】【却】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【请】【看】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【西】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【其】【首】【尾】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【从】【小】【学】【三】【年】【级】【开】【始】【,】【我】【就】【好】【动】【好】【跳】【,】【是】【个】【闲】【不】【住】【的】【主】【。】【别】【人】【说】【我】【得】【了】【多】【动】【症】【,】【甚】【至】【骂】【我】【父】【母】【没】【教】【养】【我】【…】【…】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【不】【清】【楚】【,】【别】【人】【(】【包】【括】【我】【的】【父】【母】【)】【越】【说】【我】【,】【越】【骂】【我】【,】【我】【就】【越】【逆】【反】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【徐】【老】【师】【点】【破】【了】【我】【的】【“】【血】【脉】【”】【,】【我】【是】【应】【试】【教】【育】【下】【的】【“】【冤】【死】【鬼】【”】【“】【牺】【牲】【品】【”】【。】【我】【以】【无】【比】【的】【热】【情】【跟】【着】【徐】【老】【师】【学】【习】【,】【父】【母】【对】【待】【我】【也】【转】【了】【1】【8】【0】【度】【的】【大】【弯】【。】【我】【对】【自】【己】【的】【行】【为】【越】【来】【越】【清】【晰】【,】【对】【自】【己】【的】【未】【来】【越】【来】【越】【有】【信】【心】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【真】【的】【是】【很】【幸】【运】【、】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【记】【写】【自】【己】【成】【长】【经】【历】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【“】【反】【对】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【歌】【颂】【素】【质】【教】【育】【”】【是】【其】【明】【确】【的】【中】【心】【思】【想】【。】【文】【章】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【记】【了】【几】【个】【自】【己】【“】【叛】【逆】【”】【的】【事】【件】【、】【场】【景】【,】【以】【衬】【托】【出】【“】【我】【”】【的】【性】【格】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【为】【徐】【老】【师】【的】【出】【场】【做】【好】【了】【铺】【垫】【。】【当】【今】【的】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【不】【知】【毁】【了】【多】【少】【“】【好】【孩】【子】【”】【,】【小】【作】【者】【以】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【的】【方】【式】【,】【揭】【示】【这】【种】【顽】【疾】【,】【这】【是】【十】【分】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【构】【思】【精】【巧】【,】【过】【渡】【自】【然】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【点】【题】【升】【华】【,】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【我】【们】【曾】【经】【将】【自】【己】【的】【奋】【斗】【目】【标】【小】【心】【又】【认】【真】【地】【贴】【在】【上】【面】【,】【志】【气】【昂】【昂】【的】【站】【在】【上】【面】【说】【出】【自】【己】【的】【学】【习】【对】【手】【,】【坐】【在】【上】【面】【开】【心】【地】【与】【同】【学】【对】【话】【,】【也】【曾】【紧】【张】【的】【趴】【在】【上】【面】【考】【试】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【的】【猫】【在】【上】【面】【抄】【作】【业】【。】【这】【张】【课】【桌】【见】【证】【了】【我】【们】【的】【蜕】【变】【,】【也】【见】【证】【了】【时】【光】【的】【流】【逝】【。】【它】【把】【我】【们】【第】【一】【次】【坐】【在】【上】【面】【视】【为】【开】【始】【,】【一】【直】【陪】【伴】【我】【们】【,】【直】【到】【我】【们】【考】【完】【试】【离】【开】【它】【,】【才】【算】【结】【束】【。】【它】【的】【上】【面】【,】【记】【满】【了】【我】【们】【青】【春】【的】【痕】【迹】【。】【时】【间】【,】【都】【花】【费】【在】【我】【们】【的】【蜕】【变】【上】【了】【,】【这】【张】【课】【桌】【,】【应】【该】【算】【是】【青】【春】【消】【逝】【的】【的】【见】【证】【者】【吧】【?】【<】【/】【p】【>】商都网bbs【<】【p】【>】【我】【爱】【这】【美】【丽】【的】【秋】【色】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

商都网bbs:美F-35B战机训练

【<】【p】【>】【眼】【前】【秋】【叶】【仍】【在】【不】【停】【地】【随】【风】【零】【落】【,】【一】【片】【接】【着】【一】【片】【,】【这】【是】【生】【活】【在】【为】【我】【哭】【泣】【么】【?】【忽】【然】【有】【一】【种】【想】【伸】【手】【抓】【住】【一】【片】【落】【叶】【的】【欲】【望】【,】【于】【是】【慢】【慢】【地】【伸】【出】【手】【去】【,】【一】【片】【火】【红】【的】【梧】【桐】【叶】【立】【刻】【飘】【落】【到】【手】【掌】【上】【。】【仔】【细】【端】【详】【这】【片】【秋】【叶】【,】【竟】【然】【发】【现】【秋】【叶】【曾】【经】【被】【撕】【裂】【过】【,】【在】【那】【业】【已】【枯】【萎】【的】【身】【躯】【上】【仍】【很】【清】【晰】【地】【留】【着】【一】【道】【弯】【曲】【的】【疤】【痕】【,】【可】【是】【疤】【痕】【处】【却】【又】【连】【着】【一】【小】【片】【梧】【桐】【叶】【,】【它】【是】【接】【着】【疤】【痕】【与】【残】【损】【的】【树】【叶】【一】【起】【生】【长】【着】【的】【!】【又】【一】【阵】【清】【风】【吹】【来】【,】【送】【走】【了】【手】【掌】【里】【的】【树】【叶】【,】【可】【我】【的】【脑】【海】【里】【涌】【动】【的】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【片】【沟】【通】【心】【灵】【的】【红】【树】【叶】【。】【猛】【地】【觉】【得】【这】【片】【树】【叶】【是】【生】【活】【给】【我】【的】【一】【种】【暗】【示】【,】【因】【为】【树】【叶】【的】【一】【生】【与】【我】【的】【处】【境】【竟】【是】【如】【此】【的】【神】【似】【。】【那】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【伤】【疤】【不】【就】【是】【生】【活】【迫】【使】【我】【做】【出】【的】【痛】【苦】【决】【定】【么】【,】【为】【什】【么】【它】【能】【在】【伤】【疤】【的】【一】【端】【顽】【强】【地】【生】【长】【出】【另】【一】【片】【小】【树】【叶】【,】【仍】【然】【蓬】【勃】【地】【延】【续】【着】【自】【己】【短】【暂】【的】【生】【命】【?】【而】【我】【,】【却】【始】【终】【彷】【徨】【在】【绝】【望】【的】【生】【命】【线】【上】【,】【总】【是】【难】【以】【挣】【脱】【命】【运】【的】【束】【缚】【呢】【?】【我】【应】【该】【振】【作】【起】【来】【,】【应】【该】【对】【我】【的】【一】【生】【负】【责】【。】【毕】【竟】【生】【命】【太】【珍】【贵】【,】【哪】【怕】【是】【一】【丁】【点】【儿】【的】【失】【去】【也】【会】【带】【来】【无】【尽】【的】【伤】【痛】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】商都网bbs【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【讲】【:】【“】【人】【在】【江】【湖】【漂】【,】【哪】【能】【不】【挨】【刀】【啊】【!】【”】【这】【话】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【讲】【成】【:】【“】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【哪】【能】【不】【心】【焦】【啊】【!】【”】【作】【为】【初】【三】【学】【生】【的】【我】【们】【,】【有】【哪】【一】【天】【不】【是】【在】【紧】【张】【地】【上】【课】【学】【习】【,】【哪】【一】【天】【不】【是】【在】【与】【试】【卷】【进】【行】【战】【斗】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【,】【是】【一】【个】【至】【关】【重】【要】【的】【阶】【段】【。】【我】【们】【这】【帮】【初】【三】【的】【学】【生】【在】【这】【一】【阶】【段】【,】【咬】【紧】【牙】【关】【,】【带】【着】【一】【种】【“】【咬】【定】【青】【山】【不】【放】【松】【”】【的】【精】【神】【,】【与】【铺】【天】【盖】【地】【的】【试】【卷】【打】【阵】【地】【战】【,】【与】【苦】【口】【婆】【心】【的】【唠】【叨】【打】【游】【击】【战】【,】【和】【心】【存】【惰】【性】【的】【想】【法】【打】【歼】【灭】【战】【。】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【谁】【会】【有】【轻】【松】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【同】【学】【,】【无】【不】【面】【临】【着】【艰】【难】【的】【选】【择】【:】【普】【通】【高】【中】【还】【是】【重】【点】【高】【中】【?】【当】【然】【希】【望】【是】【后】【者】【。】【可】【当】【你】【看】【到】【一】【大】【群】【初】【三】【黑】【马】【勇】【猛】【杀】【来】【,】【你】【又】【会】【心】【里】【打】【鼓】【:】【“】【天】【啊】【,】【我】【还】【能】【考】【上】【重】【点】【高】【中】【吗】【?】【”】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【真】【有】【点】【难】【熬】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【生】【活】【,】【充】【满】【了】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【,】【有】【时】【枯】【燥】【无】【味】【,】【有】【时】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【,】【有】【人】【埋】【头】【苦】【干】【,】【也】【有】【人】【心】【存】【狂】【野】【。】【老】【师】【面】【对】【着】【我】【们】【这】【些】【毫】【无】【生】【气】【的】【小】【草】【,】【只】【得】【化】【作】【甘】【霖】【,】【滋】【润】【我】【们】【枯】【燥】【的】【心】【!】【每】【天】【流】【水】【式】【的】【生】【活】【,】【一】【次】【次】【无】【情】【的】【考】【试】【成】【绩】【,】【已】【把】【我】【们】【磨】【得】【心】【无】【旁】【骛】【,】【只】【求】【放】【假】【半】【天】【,】【解】【脱】【自】【己】【。】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【实】【在】【是】【有】【些】【无】【聊】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【气】【氛】【,】【实】【在】【有】【些】【火】【药】【味】【。】【我】【们】【在】【题】【海】【中】【漫】【无】【边】【际】【地】【遨】【游】【,】【内】【心】【深】【处】【却】【有】【一】【颗】【定】【时】【炸】【弹】【。】【我】【们】【都】【等】【待】【着】【那】【天】【,】【把】【这】【颗】【炸】【弹】【投】【在】【中】【考】【试】【卷】【上】【,】【用】【正】【确】【答】【案】【炸】【出】【灿】【烂】【火】【花】【,】【鼓】【足】【干】【劲】【,】【为】【此】【一】【搏】【!】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【只】【求】【考】【得】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【初】【三】【的】【同】【学】【们】【啊】【!】【莫】【把】【初】【三】【想】【得】【太】【糟】【糕】【。】【苦】【中】【作】【乐】【这】【四】【个】【字】【就】【是】【讲】【给】【现】【在】【的】【我】【们】【听】【的】【。】【既】【然】【那】【一】【纸】【试】【卷】【能】【改】【变】【我】【们】【的】【人】【生】【,】【改】【变】【我】【们】【的】【命】【运】【,】【我】【们】【为】【何】【不】【在】【这】【短】【短】【的】【初】【三】【阶】【段】【,】【拿】【出】【最】【大】【实】【力】【,】【学】【出】【最】【好】【的】【成】【绩】【,】【在】【试】【卷】【中】【答】【出】【最】【令】【人】【满】【意】【的】【答】【案】【。】【化】【压】【力】【为】【动】【力】【,】【在】【学】【习】【中】【找】【出】【快】【乐】【,】【共】【同】【分】【享】【快】【乐】【的】【果】【实】【,】【让】【初】【三】【变】【得】【熠】【熠】【生】【辉】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【在】【初】【三】【漂】【,】【别】【把】【初】【三】【看】【得】【太】【枯】【燥】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【能】【从】【自】【身】【的】【感】【受】【出】【发】【,】【写】【出】【人】【在】【初】【三】【阶】【段】【的】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【。】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【轻】【松】【幽】【默】【,】【能】【恰】【当】【的】【运】【用】【俗】【语】【和】【排】【比】【、】【比】【喻】【的】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【生】【动】【形】【象】【地】【写】【出】【了】【初】【三】【学】【习】【生】【活】【的】【特】【点】【和】【努】【力】【拼】【搏】【、】【以】【苦】【为】【乐】【的】【学】【习】【精】【神】【。】【本】【文】【结】【构】【完】【整】【、】【层】【次】【清】【晰】【、】【行】【文】【自】【然】【,】【读】【后】【给】【人】【留】【下】【了】【很】【深】【的】【印】【象】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【褚】【平】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【事】【篇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【从】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【到】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【耻】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【曾】【被】【人】【称】【为】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【,】【这】【个】【人】【就】【是】【阿】【扁】【。】【陈】【水】【扁】【经】【常】【自】【称】【“】【阿】【扁】【”】【以】【表】【现】【“】【亲】【民】【作】【风】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【9】【5】【1】【年】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【出】【生】【在】【台】【湾】【省】【台】【南】【县】【官】【田】【乡】【西】【庄】【村】【的】【一】【个】【三】【级】【贫】【户】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【中】【积】【欠】【的】【债】【务】【总】【是】【在】【好】【多】【年】【后】【才】【能】【还】【清】【。】【这】【段】【历】【史】【在】【台】【湾】【几】【乎】【人】【尽】【皆】【知】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【也】【因】【此】【成】【为】【许】【多】【父】【母】【教】【育】【孩】【子】【的】【楷】【模】【。】【大】【学】【毕】【业】【后】【,】【他】【又】【以】【第】【一】【名】【的】【成】【绩】【考】【取】【律】【师】【资】【格】【,】【成】【为】【当】【时】【台】【湾】【最】【年】【轻】【的】【律】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【以】【一】【个】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【的】【形】【象】【在】【台】【湾】【地】【区】【领】【导】【人】【选】【举】【中】【获】【胜】【,】【坐】【上】【了】【台】【湾】【的】【头】【把】【交】【椅】【。】【然】【而】【,】【阿】【扁】【的】【支】【持】【者】【们】【没】【有】【想】【到】【,】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【亲】【民】【”】【的】【人】【却】【是】【一】【个】【洗】【钱】【高】【手】【。】【大】【笔】【大】【笔】【台】【湾】【人】【民】【的】【血】【汗】【钱】【被】【扁】【家】【偷】【汇】【往】【海】【外】【。】【这】【位】【自】【诩】【的】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【沦】【为】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【耻】【”】【,】【并】【终】【将】【被】【扫】【进】【历】【史】【的】【垃】【圾】【堆】【,】【这】【一】【点】【,】【在】【历】【史】【和】【人】【心】【中】【却】【早】【已】【有】【了】【定】【论】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【放】【弃】【了】【名】【誉】【的】【人】【就】【等】【于】【放】【弃】【了】【生】【命】【。】【—】【—】【阿】【雷】【蒂】【诺】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【做】【人】【要】【做】【对】【社】【会】【有】【用】【的】【人】【,】【而】【能】【否】【成】【为】【有】【用】【的】【人】【就】【与】【他】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【有】【着】【很】【大】【关】【系】【。】【也】【许】【贫】【穷】【的】【生】【活】【可】【能】【使】【某】【个】【人】【更】【加】【看】【重】【金】【钱】【,】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【的】【思】【想】【中】【没】【有】【荣】【辱】【观】【念】【的】【话】【,】【那】【他】【就】【无】【异】【于】【行】【尸】【走】【肉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【方】【向】【,】【成】【长】【与】【荣】【辱】【,】【成】【长】【之】【路】【需】【要】【正】【确】【的】【指】【路】【牌】【,】【知】【荣】【辱】【方】【可】【健】【康】【成】【长】【,】【利】【与】【义】【,】【尊】【严】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【麻】【木】【的】【“】【拍】【客】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【1】【2】【月】【2】【9】【日】【,】【在】【福】【州】【江】【南】【公】【园】【附】【近】【的】【万】【寿】【桥】【下】【,】【一】【名】【年】【轻】【女】【子】【由】【于】【感】【情】【原】【因】【想】【投】【河】【自】【尽】【,】【于】【是】【她】【裸】【着】【身】【体】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【走】【进】【冰】【冷】【的】【内】【河】【中】【,】【直】【至】【河】【水】【没】【过】【胸】【口】【。】【许】【多】【在】【桥】【上】【围】【观】【的】【群】【众】【不】【仅】【不】【及】【时】【施】【救】【,】【反】【而】【纷】【纷】【拿】【出】【手】【机】【争】【相】【拍】【摄】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【警】【方】【随】【后】【赶】【到】【了】【现】【场】【,】【并】【调】【来】【了】【一】【只】【捞】【垃】【圾】【的】【小】【船】【帮】【忙】【。】【在】【民】【警】【的】【耐】【心】【劝】【导】【下】【,】【水】【中】【的】【女】【子】【终】【于】【答】【应】【爬】【上】【小】【船】【。】【那】【个】【女】【子】【刚】【被】【拉】【出】【水】【面】【,】【几】【个】【年】【轻】【人】【又】【拿】【出】【手】【机】【,】【还】【喊】【着】【“】【快】【、】【快】【拍】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【鲁】【迅】【笔】【下】【有】【一】【群】【麻】【木】【的】【“】【看】【客】【”】【,】【他】【们】【促】【使】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【走】【上】【了】【弃】【医】【从】【文】【的】【道】【路】【。】【而】【今】【,】【随】【着】【社】【会】【的】【发】【展】【,】【人】【们】【已】【经】【从】【“】【看】【客】【”】【变】【为】【“】【拍】【客】【”】【,】【这】【是】【社】【会】【的】【前】【进】【还】【是】【倒】【退】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【质】【,】【精】【神】【文】【明】【,】【良】【知】【,】【麻】【木】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【江】【西】【官】【员】【北】【美】【考】【察】【1】【3】【天】【,】【惊】【人】【花】【费】【3】【5】【万】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【西】【新】【余】【人】【力】【资】【源】【考】【察】【团】【共】【1】【1】【人】【赴】【北】【美】【考】【察】【学】【习】【,】【该】【团】【所】【定】【的】【出】【访】【目】【的】【原】【本】【为】【:】【一】【是】【考】【察】【人】【力】【资】【源】【和】【政】【府】【人】【事】【管】【理】【制】【度】【;】【二】【是】【参】【观】【财】【税】【公】【务】【员】【、】【劳】【动】【力】【市】【场】【培】【训】【机】【构】【;】【三】【是】【考】【察】【借】【鉴】【政】【府】【在】【扶】【持】【人】【才】【技】【能】【培】【训】【和】【新】【型】【产】【业】【优】【秀】【人】【才】【培】【养】【选】【拔】【方】【面】【的】【经】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【至】【少】【从】【旅】【行】【社】【的】【文】【件】【上】【看】【,】【在】【行】【程】【中】【,】【丝】【毫】【看】【不】【到】【任】【何】【考】【察】【项】【目】【,】【而】【是】【十】【多】【天】【辗】【转】【北】【美】【十】【余】【名】【城】【的】【全】【程】【旅】【游】【安】【排】【。】【这】【些】【名】【城】【中】【还】【包】【括】【著】【名】【的】【赌】【城】【拉】【斯】【维】【加】【斯】【。】【更】【令】【人】【不】【可】【思】【议】【的】【是】【,】【考】【察】【团】【的】【这】【十】【几】【天】【的】【公】【款】【旅】【游】【花】【费】【竟】【高】【达】【3】【5】【万】【元】【人】【民】【币】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纳】【税】【人】【的】【钱】【交】【给】【国】【家】【,】【其】【目】【的】【是】【想】【让】【国】【家】【统】【筹】【安】【排】【,】【促】【使】【国】【家】【各】【项】【事】【业】【健】【康】【顺】【利】【发】【展】【。】【然】【而】【,】【一】【些】【父】【母】【官】【还】【是】【无】【视】【民】【众】【的】【血】【汗】【而】【将】【公】【款】【肆】【意】【挥】【霍】【,】【这】【既】【是】【一】【个】【道】【德】【问】【题】【,】【又】【是】【一】【个】【政】【治】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【职】【责】【,】【道】【德】【,】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【,】【传】【统】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【 】【“】【几】【家】【欢】【乐】【几】【家】【愁】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【河】【南】【省】【洛】【阳】【市】【西】【南】【环】【高】【速】【公】【路】【发】【生】【了】【一】【起】【车】【辆】【连】【环】【相】【撞】【事】【故】【,】【共】【造】【成】【3】【死】【2】【重】【伤】【,】【以】【及】【5】【人】【轻】【伤】【和】【2】【0】【多】【辆】【机】【动】【车】【报】【废】【或】【受】【损】【。】【几】【位】【乘】【客】【在】【高】【速】【公】【路】【车】【祸】【事】【故】【现】【场】【附】【近】【打】【扑】【克】【,】【等】【待】【事】【故】【处】【理】【完】【毕】【道】【路】【疏】【通】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【事】【件】【的】【看】【点】【不】【在】【于】【交】【通】【事】【故】【导】【致】【2】【0】【多】【辆】【机】【动】【车】【报】【废】【或】【受】【损】【,】【也】【不】【在】【于】【事】【故】【中】【死】【伤】【人】【数】【的】【多】【少】【,】【而】【在】【于】【这】【场】【血】【腥】【交】【通】【事】【故】【旁】【的】【那】【张】【牌】【桌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【苛】【求】【每】【一】【个】【乘】【客】【都】【能】【参】【加】【救】【援】【,】【因】【为】【交】【通】【事】【故】【的】【救】【援】【很】【有】【专】【业】【性】【和】【技】【术】【性】【;】【我】【们】【也】【不】【要】【求】【每】【一】【个】【乘】【客】【都】【要】【为】【交】【通】【事】【故】【的】【遇】【难】【者】【落】【泪】【,】【因】【为】【不】【幸】【者】【与】【他】【们】【可】【能】【不】【沾】【亲】【带】【故】【。】【但】【是】【,】【最】【起】【码】【的】【道】【德】【准】【则】【是】【,】【你】【不】【能】【在】【别】【人】【死】【难】【的】【地】【方】【娱】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【中】【国】【人】【就】【喜】【欢】【充】【当】【血】【腥】【场】【面】【旁】【的】【看】【客】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【他】【的】【好】【多】【作】【品】【中】【都】【对】【中】【国】【的】【看】【客】【做】【过】【刻】【画】【。】【然】【而】【在】【今】【天】【,】【中】【国】【的】【看】【客】【似】【乎】【有】【增】【无】【减】【。】【这】【也】【足】【以】【说】【明】【有】【不】【少】【人】【的】【“】【良】【知】【”】【、】【“】【道】【德】【”】【在】【沦】【丧】【。】【这】【是】【一】【个】【值】【得】【深】【思】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【情】【心】【,】【荣】【与】【辱】【,】【换】【位】【思】【考】【,】【热】【情】【与】【冷】【漠】【,】【参】【与】【,】【道】【德】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【历】【史】【篇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【辫】【子】【教】【授】【—】【—】【狂】【儒】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【何】【许】【人】【也】【?】【他】【生】【在】【南】【洋】【,】【学】【在】【西】【洋】【,】【婚】【在】【东】【洋】【,】【仕】【在】【北】【洋】【。】【精】【通】【英】【、】【法】【、】【德】【、】【拉】【丁】【、】【希】【腊】【、】【马】【来】【亚】【等】【9】【种】【语】【言】【,】【获】【1】【3】【个】【博】【士】【学】【位】【,】【倒】【读】【英】【文】【报】【纸】【嘲】【笑】【英】【国】【人】【,】【说】【美】【国】【人】【没】【有】【文】【化】【,】【第】【一】【个】【将】【中】【国】【的】【《】【论】【语】【》】【、】【《】【中】【庸】【》】【用】【英】【文】【和】【德】【文】【翻】【译】【到】【西】【方】【。】【凭】【三】【寸】【不】【烂】【之】【舌】【,】【向】【日】【本】【首】【相】【伊】【藤】【博】【文】【大】【讲】【孔】【学】【,】【与】【文】【学】【大】【师】【列】【夫】【·】【托】【尔】【斯】【泰】【书】【信】【来】【往】【,】【讨】【论】【世】【界】【文】【化】【和】【政】【坛】【局】【势】【,】【被】【印】【度】【圣】【雄】【甘】【地】【称】【为】【“】【最】【尊】【贵】【的】【中】【国】【人】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【也】【被】【称】【为】【“】【文】【坛】【怪】【杰】【”】【,】【由】【于】【博】【学】【多】【才】【,】【被】【聘】【为】【北】【京】【大】【学】【的】【教】【授】【。】【他】【在】【北】【大】【期】【间】【,】【正】【好】【赶】【上】【了】【新】【文】【化】【运】【动】【,】【一】【向】【以】【“】【大】【儒】【”】【自】【居】【的】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【却】【极】【力】【反】【对】【新】【文】【化】【运】【动】【,】【他】【在】【北】【京】【大】【学】【任】【教】【,】【梳】【着】【小】【辫】【走】【进】【课】【堂】【,】【经】【常】【引】【来】【学】【生】【们】【的】【一】【片】【哄】【堂】【大】【笑】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【他】【的】【日】【常】【打】【扮】【也】【格】【外】【特】【殊】【,】【戴】【着】【瓜】【皮】【小】【帽】【,】【身】【着】【长】【袍】【马】【褂】【。】【在】【个】【人】【主】【张】【上】【,】【他】【甚】【至】【为】【纳】【妾】【、】【裹】【小】【脚】【辩】【护】【。】【并】【可】【笑】【地】【以】【每】【个】【茶】【壶】【配】【四】【个】【茶】【碗】【来】【比】【喻】【一】【个】【男】【子】【纳】【多】【个】【小】【妾】【的】【合】【理】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【北】【大】【“】【兼】【容】【并】【包】【”】【的】【教】【育】【方】【针】【让】【教】【育】【思】【想】【百】【家】【争】【鸣】【。】【这】【也】【使】【得】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【成】【为】【一】【道】【引】【人】【注】【目】【的】【校】【园】【风】【景】【。】【从】【他】【身】【上】【,】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【真】【正】【的】【保】【守】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【,】【解】【放】【思】【想】【,】【坚】【定】【,】【个】【性】【,】【思】【想】【的】【留】【守】【,】【忠】【诚】【,】【包】【容】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【口】【蜜】【腹】【剑】【的】【李】【林】【甫】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【玄】【宗】【的】【兵】【部】【尚】【书】【李】【林】【甫】【,】【论】【才】【艺】【,】【也】【还】【不】【错】【,】【一】【手】【字】【、】【画】【都】【很】【好】【;】【但】【他】【做】【官】【却】【不】【正】【正】【诚】【诚】【地】【办】【事】【,】【而】【是】【一】【味】【迁】【就】【和】【迎】【合】【玄】【宗】【的】【意】【旨】【。】【因】【此】【,】【他】【很】【得】【玄】【宗】【的】【宠】【信】【,】【一】【直】【在】【朝】【中】【做】【了】【1】【9】【年】【的】【官】【。】【李】【林】【甫】【和】【一】【般】【人】【接】【触】【,】【也】【总】【是】【在】【外】【表】【上】【表】【现】【出】【和】【人】【很】【友】【好】【,】【非】【常】【合】【作】【,】【嘴】【里】【说】【尽】【所】【有】【可】【以】【说】【的】【好】【听】【的】【、】【善】【意】【的】【话】【。】【可】【是】【实】【际】【上】【,】【他】【的】【性】【情】【和】【他】【的】【表】【面】【态】【度】【完】【全】【相】【反】【:】【他】【竟】【是】【一】【个】【非】【常】【狡】【猾】【阴】【险】【、】【常】【常】【使】【坏】【主】【意】【来】【害】【人】【的】【人】【。】【坏】【人】【虽】【然】【有】【时】【可】【以】【达】【到】【害】【人】【的】【目】【的】【,】【逞】【奸】【谋】【于】【一】【时】【,】【但】【是】【,】【日】【子】【久】【了】【,】【人】【家】【就】【发】【现】【了】【他】【这】【种】【伪】【善】【,】【于】【是】【大】【家】【便】【在】【背】【地】【里】【说】【他】【“】【口】【有】【蜜】【、】【腹】【有】【剑】【”】【,】【即】【:】【口】【上】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【,】【心】【中】【利】【剑】【害】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【笑】【里】【藏】【刀】【”】【。】【这】【种】【表】【里】【不】【一】【的】【人】【是】【最】【危】【险】【的】【,】【常】【常】【令】【人】【防】【不】【胜】【防】【。】【换】【个】【角】【度】【,】【在】【大】【众】【看】【来】【,】【这】【种】【表】【里】【不】【一】【的】【人】【往】【往】【也】【是】【没】【有】【好】【下】【场】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【适】【用】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【内】【与】【外】【,】【诚】【实】【与】【虚】【伪】【,】【表】【里】【如】【一】【,】【防】【备】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【的】【错】【误】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【德】【裔】【美】【国】【科】【学】【家】【阿】【尔】【伯】【特】【·】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【,】【是】【现】【代】【物】【理】【学】【的】【开】【创】【者】【和】【奠】【基】【人】【,】【赢】【得】【世】【人】【无】【尽】【的】【赞】【誉】【,】【是】【一】【位】【举】【世】【公】【认】【的】【“】【天】【才】【”】【。】【不】【过】【,】【在】【他】【的】【一】【生】【中】【,】【并】【非】【什】【么】【都】【完】【美】【无】【缺】【,】【也】【不】【是】【无】【论】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【、】【在】【什】【么】【问】【题】【上】【都】【完】【全】【正】【确】【,】【更】【没】【有】【人】【敢】【说】【包】【括】【他】【的】【相】【对】【论】【在】【内】【的】【所】【有】【理】【论】【在】【人】【类】【的】【历】【史】【上】【就】【是】【绝】【对】【真】【理】【。】【其】【实】【,】【他】【曾】【犯】【下】【许】【多】【错】【误】【。】【作】【家】【汉】【斯】【·】【奥】【哈】【尼】【亚】【在】【一】【本】【名】【为】【《】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【的】【错】【误】【:】【天】【才】【的】【人】【性】【弱】【点】【》】【的】【书】【中】【,】【列】【举】【了】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【在】【科】【学】【探】【索】【过】【程】【中】【犯】【下】【的】【一】【系】【列】【错】【误】【,】【其】【中】【,】【较】【为】【重】【大】【的】【错】【误】【有】【2】【3】【个】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【错】【误】【仅】【是】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【在】【科】【学】【探】【索】【中】【所】【犯】【错】【误】【中】【较】【为】【重】【大】【的】【几】【条】【,】【其】【实】【,】【他】【所】【犯】【的】【错】【误】【比】【这】【还】【不】【知】【要】【多】【多】【少】【倍】【。】【他】【的】【错】【误】【,】【无】【论】【在】【数】【量】【上】【还】【是】【影】【响】【上】【都】【不】【可】【小】【视】【。】【正】【是】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【在】【不】【同】【阶】【段】【、】【不】【同】【层】【面】【、】【不】【同】【问】【题】【上】【暴】【露】【出】【了】【“】【天】【才】【科】【学】【家】【”】【的】【人】【性】【弱】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【论】【多】【么】【伟】【大】【的】【科】【学】【家】【也】【会】【犯】【错】【,】【原】【因】【很】【简】【单】【,】【科】【学】【家】【也】【是】【人】【。】【反】【之】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【永】【远】【不】【犯】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【我】【们】【也】【只】【能】【以】【“】【神】【”】【来】【称】【呼】【他】【,】【而】【事】【实】【上】【,】【“】【神】【”】【是】【不】【存】【在】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【才】【的】【弱】【点】【,】【完】【美】【,】【错】【误】【,】【真】【实】【,】【成】【长】【<】【b】【r】【>】商都网bbs【<】【p】【>】【我】【爱】【梅】【花】【,】【爱】【它】【的】【骨】【气】【,】【爱】【它】【的】【坚】【强】【,】【爱】【它】【的】【永】【不】【屈】【服】【。】【它】【排】【在】【岁】【寒】【三】【友】【的】【第】【一】【位】【,】【是】【最】【有】【骨】【气】【的】【!】【它】【在】【严】【寒】【的】【冬】【天】【时】【不】【肯】【屈】【服】【,】【将】【自】【己】【娇】【嫩】【的】【肌】【肤】【顶】【着】【风】【欺】【雪】【压】【。】【只】【有】【它】【会】【有】【那】【份】【精】【神】【与】【那】【份】【傲】【气】【在】【寒】【冷】【的】【冬】【天】【与】【风】【雪】【做】【斗】【争】【。】【梅】【因】【冬】【天】【而】【存】【在】【,】【而】【正】【因】【为】【梅】【也】【使】【冬】【天】【添】【加】【了】【几】【分】【温】【馨】【、】【清】【香】【,】【减】【少】【了】【几】【分】【严】【寒】【、】【冷】【酷】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【生】【病】【的】【日】【子】【,】【母】【亲】【瘦】【了】【。】【父】【亲】【下】【葬】【的】【日】【子】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【头】【发】【乱】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【脸】【上】【的】【皱】【纹】【深】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【一】【双】【眼】【睛】【浑】【浊】【了】【。】【看】【着】【坐】【在】【门】【口】【单】【薄】【的】【、】【两】【眼】【茫】【然】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【我】【知】【道】【我】【该】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【场】【雪】【下】【得】【真】【大】【,】【房】【顶】【上】【、】【树】【杈】【间】【、】【地】【上】【积】【了】【厚】【厚】【的】【雪】【。】【同】【学】【们】【在】【父】【母】【的】【呵】【护】【下】【踩】【着】【积】【雪】【嬉】【笑】【着】【回】【家】【了】【,】【笑】【声】【后】【面】【留】【下】【一】【个】【寂】【寞】【的】【我】【。】【我】【独】【自】【一】【人】【走】【在】【回】【家】【的】【路】【上】【,】【是】【被】【我】【踩】【得】【“】【咯】【吱】【咯】【吱】【”】【响】【的】【雪】【声】【伴】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【里】【空】【荡】【荡】【的】【,】【寂】【静】【无】【声】【,】【只】【有】【狗】【儿】【从】【窝】【里】【跑】【出】【来】【快】【活】【地】【摇】【着】【尾】【巴】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【向】【田】【地】【跑】【去】【,】【我】【知】【道】【妈】【妈】【一】【定】【在】【刮】【塑】【料】【大】【棚】【上】【的】【积】【雪】【。】【邻】【居】【大】【棚】【上】【的】【雪】【已】【经】【刮】【完】【了】【,】【透】【过】【塑】【料】【大】【棚】【可】【以】【看】【到】【里】【面】【绿】【油】【油】【的】【芹】【菜】【。】【我】【家】【的】【大】【棚】【还】【盖】【着】【厚】【厚】【的】【雪】【,】【好】【像】【捂】【着】【厚】【厚】【的】【棉】【被】【。】【我】【在】【两】【个】【大】【棚】【中】【间】【的】【地】【沟】【里】【找】【到】【了】【母】【亲】【,】【她】【两】【腿】【深】【陷】【在】【雪】【中】【,】【每】【走】【动】【一】【步】【都】【很】【艰】【难】【。】【她】【手】【拿】【长】【杆】【,】【长】【杆】【的】【顶】【端】【钉】【着】【一】【块】【木】【板】【,】【她】【一】【下】【一】【下】【地】【刮】【着】【,】【刮】【几】【下】【就】【要】【停】【下】【歇】【会】【儿】【,】【妈】【妈】【肯】【定】【累】【坏】【了】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【夺】【过】【长】【杆】【,】【有】【力】【地】【刮】【起】【雪】【来】【,】【我】【刮】【雪】【的】【速】【度】【明】【显】【比】【母】【亲】【快】【多】【了】【,】【母】【亲】【看】【着】【我】【笑】【了】【,】【笑】【里】【含】【着】【泪】【。】【只】【干】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【我】【的】【胳】【膊】【就】【酸】【了】【,】【鞋】【子】【也】【湿】【透】【了】【,】【可】【是】【我】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【不】【能】【停】【下】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【去】【了】【,】【我】【该】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【节】【很】【快】【就】【到】【了】【,】【家】【家】【张】【灯】【结】【彩】【,】【我】【家】【也】【喜】【事】【连】【连】【。】【出】【嫁】【的】【姐】【姐】【要】【生】【产】【了】【,】【我】【要】【做】【舅】【舅】【了】【;】【我】【家】【的】【大】【葱】【丰】【收】【了】【。】【一】【个】【商】【贩】【看】【中】【了】【我】【家】【的】【大】【葱】【,】【定】【下】【来】【要】【求】【每】【天】【送】【去】【一】【车】【。】【母】【亲】【要】【去】【医】【院】【照】【顾】【姐】【姐】【,】【这】【出】【葱】【、】【送】【葱】【的】【活】【儿】【就】【落】【在】【我】【的】【肩】【上】【。】【清】【早】【,】【我】【蹬】【着】【车】【上】【路】【了】【,】【积】【雪】【还】【没】【有】【融】【化】【完】【,】【路】【面】【上】【结】【了】【很】【多】【冰】【疙】【瘩】【。】【这】【一】【车】【葱】【装】【得】【实】【在】【结】【实】【,】【足】【有】【3】【0】【0】【多】【斤】【。】【我】【吃】【力】【地】【蹬】【着】【,】【可】【车】【子】【还】【像】【蜗】【牛】【一】【样】【慢】【慢】【地】【蠕】【动】【着】【。】【为】【了】【骑】【快】【点】【儿】【,】【我】【把】【棉】【袄】【脱】【下】【来】【搭】【在】【车】【上】【,】【将】【屁】【股】【抬】【离】【车】【座】【,】【使】【出】【全】【身】【的】【劲】【儿】【蹬】【。】【车】【轮】【将】【结】【冰】【的】【路】【面】【轧】【得】【“】【嘎】【嘎】【”】【响】【,】【有】【时】【一】【大】【块】【冰】【被】【轧】【得】【迸】【出】【去】【好】【远】【。】【一】【辆】【辆】【机】【动】【车】【从】【我】【身】【边】【驶】【过】【,】【我】【没】【有】【羡】【慕】【;】【一】【个】【个】【同】【龄】【人】【在】【街】【头】【放】【着】【花】【炮】【,】【我】【没】【有】【眼】【热】【。】【我】【只】【是】【低】【头】【狠】【劲】【地】【蹬】【着】【车】【,】【我】【知】【道】【,】【这】【一】【亩】【地】【的】【大】【葱】【卖】【完】【,】【我】【和】【母】【亲】【可】【以】【过】【一】【个】【幸】【福】【年】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【父】【亲】【的】【日】【子】【里】【,】【我】【的】【目】【光】【变】【得】【坚】【毅】【了】【;】【没】【有】【父】【亲】【的】【日】【子】【里】【,】【我】【的】【性】【格】【变】【得】【沉】【默】【了】【;】【没】【有】【父】【亲】【的】【日】【子】【里】【,】【我】【的】【骨】【头】【变】【得】【坚】【硬】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【去】【了】【,】【我】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【贵】【在】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【本】【文】【的】【作】【者】【做】【到】【了】【。】【他】【将】【失】【去】【父】【亲】【后】【的】【种】【种】【感】【受】【融】【入】【文】【中】【,】【有】【悲】【伤】【,】【有】【坚】【强】【,】【有】【孤】【独】【,】【更】【有】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【责】【任】【。】【文】【章】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【字】【字】【句】【句】【饱】【含】【艰】【辛】【和】【坚】【毅】【,】【能】【够】【引】【起】【读】【者】【内】【心】【的】【同】【情】【、】【敬】【佩】【和】【震】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】商都网bbs【<】【p】【>】【秋】【天】【的】【风】【,】【一】【阵】【一】【阵】【,】【好】【像】【在】【梳】【头】【的】【仙】【女】【一】【样】【,】【用】【她】【的】【发】【梢】【拂】【过】【我】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【轻】【轻】【的】【,】【柔】【柔】【的】【,】【时】【不】【时】【哪】【位】【仙】【女】【会】【随】【性】【的】【翩】【翩】【起】【舞】【,】【她】【那】【动】【人】【的】【舞】【姿】【在】【空】【中】【显】【得】【那】【么】【漂】【亮】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【真】【题】【回】【放】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【水】【,】【有】【时】【是】【雪】【,】【有】【时】【是】【露】【,】【有】【时】【是】【冰】【凌】【,】【有】【时】【是】【雨】【珠】【…】【…】【变】【的】【是】【形】【态】【,】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【晶】【莹】【;】【日】【子】【,】【有】【时】【是】【甜】【,】【有】【时】【是】【苦】【,】【有】【时】【是】【幸】【福】【,】【有】【时】【是】【酸】【楚】【…】【…】【变】【的】【是】【感】【受】【,】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【真】【实】【。】【生】【活】【中】【许】【多】【变】【化】【着】【的】【人】【、】【事】【、】【物】【,】【都】【有】【不】【变】【的】【地】【方】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【为】【题】【目】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【(】【5】【5】【分】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【示】【与】【要】【求】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【1】【)】【在】【横】【线】【处】【填】【写】【一】【个】【词】【或】【短】【语】【,】【将】【题】【目】【补】【充】【完】【整】【,】【然】【后】【写】【作】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【2】【)】【可】【以】【写】【你】【的】【经】【历】【、】【见】【闻】【,】【也】【可】【以】【写】【你】【的】【感】【悟】【、】【认】【识】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【3】【)】【可】【以】【大】【胆】【选】【择】【你】【最】【能】【驾】【驭】【的】【文】【体】【进】【行】【写】【作】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【4】【)】【文】【中】【不】【要】【出】【现】【真】【实】【的】【姓】【名】【,】【校】【名】【,】【人】【名】【等】【,】【否】【则】【会】【被】【扣】【分】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【5】【)】【抄】【袭】【是】【一】【种】【不】【良】【行】【为】【,】【相】【信】【你】【不】【会】【照】【搬】【别】【人】【的】【文】【章】【,】【否】【则】【会】【影】【响】【你】【的】【成】【绩】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【6】【)】【考】【虑】【到】【内】【容】【的】【充】【实】【,】【文】【章】【不】【要】【少】【于】【5】【0】【0】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【试】【题】【解】【读】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【0】【年】【安】【徽】【省】【的】【中】【考】【作】【文】【是】【一】【个】【给】【材】【料】【的】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【这】【个】【命】【题】【既】【揭】【示】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【些】【普】【遍】【存】【在】【的】【哲】【理】【,】【具】【有】【辩】【证】【色】【彩】【,】【同】【时】【这】【个】【诗】【意】【化】【的】【命】【题】【也】【给】【考】【生】【预】【留】【了】【足】【够】【的】【写】【作】【空】【间】【,】【在】【内】【容】【和】【主】【旨】【上】【有】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【的】【限】【制】【;】【既】【唤】【醒】【了】【考】【生】【的】【生】【活】【积】【累】【,】【又】【引】【导】【他】【们】【进】【行】【理】【性】【的】【思】【考】【。】【文】【题】【所】【给】【的】【材】【料】【也】【能】【有】【效】【唤】【起】【考】【生】【的】【生】【活】【体】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【首】【先】【要】【注】【意】【审】【题】【,】【审】【材】【料】【。】【这】【个】【题】【目】【材】【料】【中】【共】【有】【两】【句】【话】【,】【第】【一】【句】【指】【出】【水】【和】【日】【子】【这】【两】【种】【事】【物】【虽】【然】【会】【时】【时】【发】【生】【变】【化】【,】【但】【这】【变】【化】【的】【是】【形】【式】【,】【而】【其】【本】【质】【是】【不】【变】【的】【;】【第】【二】【句】【话】【其】【实】【是】【对】【第】【一】【句】【话】【的】【总】【结】【。】【材】【料】【意】【在】【说】【明】【事】【物】【既】【有】【变】【化】【的】【一】【面】【,】【也】【有】【不】【变】【的】【一】【面】【,】【即】【事】【物】【是】【变】【与】【不】【变】【的】【统】【一】【体】【。】【我】【们】【写】【作】【时】【要】【特】【别】【注】【意】【事】【物】【之】【间】【的】【这】【种】【对】【立】【统】【一】【关】【系】【。】【这】【个】【命】【题】【的】【题】【目】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【,】【我】【们】【仔】【细】【分】【析】【,】【不】【难】【看】【出】【要】【补】【充】【的】【内】【容】【是】【写】【作】【的】【对】【象】【,】【如】【亲】【情】【、】【爱】【好】【、】【读】【书】【、】【旅】【游】【等】【等】【。】【而】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【”】【则】【是】【写】【作】【的】【重】【点】【,】【我】【们】【在】【文】【中】【就】【要】【具】【体】【写】【清】【楚】【这】【一】【对】【象】【一】【般】【有】【哪】【些】【变】【化】【形】【式】【,】【而】【其】【中】【不】【会】【变】【的】【又】【是】【什】【么】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【好】【这】【次】【作】【文】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【选】【择】【好】【文】【体】【。】【这】【里】【所】【说】【的】【要】【选】【择】【好】【文】【体】【,】【包】【括】【两】【个】【方】【面】【:】【一】【是】【要】【选】【取】【与】【题】【目】【相】【称】【的】【文】【体】【。】【很】【多】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【,】【题】【目】【本】【身】【就】【带】【有】【文】【体】【倾】【向】【,】【如】【果】【把】【握】【不】【准】【确】【就】【容】【易】【写】【偏】【。】【如】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【应】【该】【是】【叙】【事】【抒】【情】【性】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【我】【们】【写】【作】【时】【要】【把】【不】【变】【的】【原】【因】【写】【清】【楚】【。】【二】【是】【要】【选】【择】【自】【己】【容】【易】【出】【彩】【的】【文】【题】【。】【有】【时】【,】【题】【目】【比】【较】【宽】【泛】【,】【不】【带】【有】【明】【确】【的】【文】【体】【倾】【向】【或】【文】【体】【限】【定】【,】【这】【就】【让】【我】【们】【拥】【有】【了】【更】【多】【的】【自】【由】【空】【间】【,】【我】【们】【可】【根】【据】【自】【己】【的】【特】【长】【选】【适】【合】【自】【己】【的】【文】【体】【来】【写】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【另】【外】【在】【写】【作】【时】【还】【要】【注】【意】【融】【入】【自】【己】【的】【真】【情】【。】【近】【年】【来】【中】【考】【作】【文】【的】【评】【分】【标】【准】【都】【是】【要】【求】【写】【有】【“】【我】【”】【之】【文】【,】【抒】【发】【自】【己】【的】【真】【情】【实】【感】【。】【“】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【这】【个】【作】【文】【有】【利】【于】【我】【们】【抒】【情】【。】【这】【不】【变】【的】【对】【我】【们】【有】【什】【么】【影】【响】【?】【我】【们】【对】【这】【不】【变】【的】【有】【什】【么】【感】【受】【等】【,】【只】【要】【把】【自】【己】【心】【中】【的】【真】【实】【感】【受】【抒】【发】【出】【来】【,】【你】【的】【作】【文】【就】【会】【很】【感】【人】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【思】【念】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【我】【养】【我】【的】【村】【庄】【是】【一】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【地】【方】【。】【这】【里】【民】【风】【纯】【朴】【,】【景】【物】【随】【着】【四】【季】【、】【早】【晚】【的】【变】【化】【而】【变】【化】【,】【但】【在】【我】【心】【中】【却】【是】【“】【欲】【把】【村】【庄】【比】【西】【子】【,】【早】【晚】【浓】【淡】【总】【是】【美】【”】【,】【永】【远】【不】【变】【的】【是】【我】【对】【村】【庄】【的】【思】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【村】【庄】【中】【的】【树】【林】【别】【有】【一】【番】【情】【趣】【,】【阳】【光】【透】【过】【密】【密】【的】【丛】【林】【,】【落】【在】【片】【片】【油】【绿】【的】【树】【叶】【上】【。】【微】【风】【拂】【过】【,】【绿】【影】【婆】【娑】【,】【那】【几】【束】【阳】【光】【在】【树】【冠】【上】【跳】【跃】【、】【舞】【动】【。】【树】【下】【,】【绿】【影】【被】【切】【割】【成】【不】【规】【则】【的】【形】【状】【,】【和】【着】【微】【风】【,】【犹】【如】【一】【场】【绝】【妙】【的】【皮】【影】【戏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【地】【面】【上】【,】【静】【静】【地】【躺】【着】【不】【知】【何】【时】【落】【下】【的】【树】【叶】【。】【原】【来】【生】【命】【勃】【发】【的】【夏】【季】【,】【也】【有】【树】【叶】【的】【凋】【零】【,】【多】【少】【夹】【杂】【着】【几】【丝】【秋】【的】【哀】【怨】【。】【弯】【下】【腰】【,】【俯】【身】【拾】【起】【落】【叶】【,】【细】【细】【观】【察】【叶】【片】【上】【的】【纹】【络】【,】【上】【面】【记】【载】【着】【生】【长】【的】【风】【风】【雨】【雨】【。】【飘】【逸】【的】【云】【朵】【像】【童】【年】【遗】【失】【的】【童】【话】【,】【静】【静】【地】【躺】【在】【梦】【幻】【般】【的】【蓝】【色】【梦】【境】【里】【。】【暖】【暖】【的】【阳】【光】【在】【这】【里】【显】【得】【格】【外】【温】【柔】【,】【仿】【佛】【厌】【倦】【了】【被】【钢】【筋】【水】【泥】【包】【围】【的】【城】【市】【中】【的】【奢】【华】【,】【眷】【恋】【着】【村】【庄】【中】【淳】【朴】【的】【乡】【民】【和】【大】【地】【。】【田】【埂】【被】【划】【分】【得】【整】【齐】【俨】【然】【,】【田】【垄】【上】【,】【零】【星】【地】【点】【缀】【着】【一】【些】【不】【知】【名】【的】【花】【儿】【,】【让】【原】【本】【静】【穆】【的】【田】【野】【变】【得】【活】【泼】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【,】【村】【庄】【是】【一】【幅】【素】【描】【,】【只】【寥】【寥】【几】【笔】【,】【便】【勾】【勒】【出】【它】【的】【美】【妙】【神】【韵】【。】【天】【际】【刚】【刚】【露】【出】【一】【片】【鱼】【肚】【白】【,】【村】【民】【们】【就】【扛】【着】【锄】【头】【,】【背】【着】【背】【篓】【,】【去】【田】【间】【劳】【作】【了】【。】【几】【缕】【晨】【雾】【中】【袅】【袅】【上】【升】【的】【炊】【烟】【,】【绕】【着】【房】【顶】【,】【绕】【着】【大】【树】【,】【慢】【慢】【消】【失】【在】【天】【际】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【,】【村】【庄】【是】【一】【幅】【油】【画】【。】【色】【彩】【鲜】【明】【,】【热】【闹】【非】【凡】【。】【麦】【田】【里】【,】【暖】【风】【催】【熟】【了】【沉】【甸】【甸】【的】【麦】【穗】【,】【空】【气】【中】【弥】【漫】【着】【丰】【收】【的】【喜】【悦】【。】【树】【荫】【下】【,】【有】【高】【谈】【阔】【论】【的】【叔】【叔】【伯】【伯】【,】【有】【闲】【话】【家】【常】【的】【三】【姑】【六】【婆】【,】【也】【有】【谈】【论】【柴】【米】【油】【盐】【的】【阿】【婆】【大】【娘】【,】【就】【连】【年】【过】【古】【稀】【的】【老】【人】【们】【也】【兴】【致】【勃】【勃】【地】【杀】【起】【象】【棋】【来】【。】【棋】【子】【落】【定】【,】【志】【在】【必】【胜】【,】【一】【副】【胸】【有】【成】【竹】【的】【神】【态】【。】【他】【们】【有】【时】【也】【会】【孩】【童】【般】【争】【得】【面】【红】【耳】【赤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【傍】【晚】【,】【村】【庄】【是】【一】【幅】【水】【墨】【画】【。】【太】【阳】【慢】【慢】【被】【天】【际】【的】【晚】【霞】【淹】【没】【,】【黄】【昏】【的】【呼】【吸】【渐】【渐】【降】【低】【了】【声】【调】【。】【暮】【色】【中】【渐】【次】【亮】【起】【来】【的】【灯】【火】【犹】【如】【空】【中】【繁】【星】【,】【让】【回】【家】【的】【路】【人】【升】【腾】【出】【无】【限】【温】【馨】【。】【墨】【绿】【的】【山】【,】【安】【静】【地】【进】【入】【了】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【里】【,】【我】【做】【了】【一】【个】【甜】【蜜】【的】【梦】【:】【在】【一】【片】【无】【际】【的】【田】【野】【里】【,】【我】【伴】【着】【缕】【缕】【微】【风】【,】【朝】【着】【村】【庄】【的】【方】【向】【走】【去】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【简】【评】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【扣】【题】【准】【确】【,】【语】【言】【优】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【是】【一】【篇】【极】【有】【特】【色】【的】【散】【文】【。】【鲜】【明】【特】【点】【之】【一】【是】【扣】【题】【相】【当】【准】【确】【。】【文】【章】【通】【过】【描】【写】【清】【晨】【、】【中】【午】【,】【傍】【晚】【一】【天】【中】【不】【断】【变】【化】【的】【景】【致】【,】【来】【展】【现】【村】【庄】【的】【美】【丽】【景】【色】【,】【表】【达】【作】【者】【对】【村】【庄】【永】【远】【不】【变】【的】【情】【感】【—】【—】【思】【念】【,】【文】【章】【最】【后】【的】【梦】【境】【也】【巧】【妙】【地】【点】【出】【了】【这】【个】【中】【心】【。】【第】【二】【个】【特】【点】【是】【语】【言】【优】【美】【流】【畅】【,】【让】【人】【读】【来】【有】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】【如】【“】【微】【风】【拂】【过】【,】【绿】【影】【婆】【娑】【,】【那】【几】【束】【阳】【光】【在】【树】【冠】【上】【跳】【跃】【、】【舞】【动】【”】【,】【“】【太】【阳】【慢】【慢】【被】【天】【际】【的】【晚】【霞】【淹】【没】【,】【黄】【昏】【的】【呼】【吸】【渐】【渐】【降】【低】【了】【声】【调】【”】【。】【这】【些】【描】【写】【都】【相】【当】【优】【美】【,】【都】【能】【从】【不】【同】【方】【面】【展】【现】【村】【庄】【的】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【会】【变】【的】【是】【友】【谊】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【悄】【悄】【地】【,】【你】【走】【了】【,】【却】【留】【给】【我】【满】【怀】【的】【惆】【怅】【,】【我】【只】【好】【在】【这】【里】【回】【忆】【我】【们】【的】【梦】【想】【与】【希】【望】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【候】【,】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【,】【架】【在】【你】【与】【我】【的】【手】【中】【,】【我】【们】【一】【起】【携】【手】【,】【展】【望】【未】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【X】【,】【你】【长】【大】【了】【想】【做】【什】【么】【啊】【?】【”】【躺】【在】【草】【地】【上】【的】【你】【眨】【着】【眼】【问】【我】【。】【“】【我】【?】【我】【不】【知】【道】【呢】【。】【你】【呢】【?】【”】【“】【啊】【!】【你】【不】【知】【道】【?】【”】【我】【脸】【红】【了】【,】【仿】【佛】【做】【错】【了】【什】【么】【事】【。】【你】【说】【:】【“】【我】【的】【梦】【想】【就】【是】【当】【老】【师】【。】【”】【“】【是】【吗】【?】【原】【来】【这】【么】【简】【单】【。】【这】【么】【说】【的】【话】【,】【我】【也】【有】【梦】【想】【啊】【!】【”】【我】【恍】【然】【大】【悟】【。】【“】【是】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【”】【“】【作】【家】【。】【不】【过】【我】【们】【俩】【的】【梦】【想】【都】【很】【遥】【远】【呢】【。】【”】【“】【所】【以】【才】【要】【一】【起】【努】【力】【啊】【!】【”】【你】【坚】【定】【地】【说】【。】【我】【抬】【起】【头】【:】【“】【没】【错】【,】【是】【该】【努】【力】【了】【!】【”】【你】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【,】【我】【们】【一】【起】【走】【过】【童】【年】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【学】【后】【,】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【,】【立】【在】【我】【与】【你】【眼】【中】【,】【我】【们】【不】【在】【一】【所】【学】【校】【,】【但】【我】【们】【常】【在】【一】【起】【,】【共】【同】【努】【力】【,】【为】【了】【理】【想】【而】【奋】【斗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【靠】【着】【背】【,】【坐】【在】【槐】【树】【下】【,】【我】【们】【用】【充】【满】【朝】【气】【的】【脸】【凝】【望】【着】【那】【初】【升】【的】【朝】【阳】【。】【“】【X】【,】【你】【最】【近】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【你】【回】【过】【头】【来】【问】【我】【。】【“】【同】【学】【老】【师】【都】【挺】【好】【的】【,】【我】【很】【快】【乐】【!】【”】【我】【不】【禁】【抬】【头】【仰】【望】【那】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【。】【此】【时】【,】【我】【的】【心】【情】【是】【明】【亮】【的】【,】【蝉】【鸣】【的】【夏】【天】【,】【微】【风】【拂】【过】【我】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【你】【的】【长】【发】【扫】【到】【了】【我】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【带】【着】【一】【抹】【香】【味】【。】【你】【笑】【着】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【X】【,】【我】【们】【来】【比】【赛】【好】【不】【好】【?】【期】【末】【时】【,】【看】【谁】【的】【分】【数】【高】【。】【”】【“】【好】【啊】【,】【我】【赢】【定】【了】【!】【”】【我】【骄】【傲】【地】【笑】【着】【说】【。】【“】【那】【可】【不】【一】【定】【哦】【!】【等】【着】【吧】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【超】【过】【你】【的】【!】【”】【你】【笑】【了】【,】【像】【茉】【莉】【花】【一】【样】【,】【清】【新】【自】【然】【。】【我】【们】【目】【光】【交】【织】【在】【一】【起】【的】【这】【一】【刻】【,】【铭】【记】【我】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【啊】【,】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【,】【刻】【在】【了】【我】【们】【的】【心】【中】【,】【永】【远】【有】【着】【绚】【丽】【的】【色】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【X】【,】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【”】【我】【好】【奇】【地】【看】【着】【眼】【泪】【婆】【娑】【的】【你】【,】【“】【是】【谁】【欺】【负】【你】【了】【?】【”】【“】【不】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【,】【只】【是】【沙】【子】【进】【眼】【睛】【了】【。】【”】【你】【赶】【紧】【揉】【了】【揉】【眼】【睛】【。】【“】【这】【么】【老】【土】【的】【谎】【言】【你】【也】【说】【得】【出】【来】【,】【骗】【谁】【呢】【你】【!】【”】【我】【有】【点】【不】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【“】【X】【,】【如】【果】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【们】【分】【开】【了】【,】【你】【会】【记】【住】【我】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【说】【什】【么】【啊】【你】【!】【那】【肯】【定】【了】【啊】【!】【”】【“】【哦】【!】【我】【也】【会】【的】【!】【如】【果】【到】【了】【那】【一】【天】【,】【记】【得】【三】【年】【后】【在】【老】【地】【方】【等】【我】【哦】【!】【我】【一】【定】【会】【来】【的】【!】【”】【你】【终】【于】【笑】【了】【,】【只】【不】【过】【,】【笑】【得】【有】【点】【无】【奈】【。】【后】【来】【,】【周】【围】【的】【景】【物】【都】【还】【一】【样】【存】【在】【,】【可】【你】【搬】【走】【了】【。】【现】【在】【,】【我】【给】【你】【的】【答】【案】【依】【旧】【,】【我】【记】【得】【你】【,】【我】【会】【等】【着】【与】【你】【的】【重】【逢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【,】【定】【格】【在】【我】【们】【的】【生】【命】【中】【,】【一】【直】【到】【永】【远】【,】【留】【给】【我】【永】【远】【的】【回】【忆】【,】【那】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【,】【友】【谊】【的】【虹】【桥】【,】【如】【彩】【虹】【般】【美】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【简】【评】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【抒】【情】【真】【切】【,】【主】【题】【突】【出】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【很】【有】【特】【色】【的】【叙】【事】【抒】【情】【散】【文】【,】【小】【作】【者】【以】【时】【间】【为】【顺】【序】【,】【叙】【述】【了】【我】【与】【小】【伙】【伴】【的】【交】【往】【过】【程】【及】【彼】【此】【心】【灵】【的】【相】【应】【,】【文】【章】【写】【得】【不】【矫】【揉】【造】【作】【,】【有】【真】【情】【,】【从】【文】【笔】【中】【我】【们】【看】【到】【小】【作】【者】【对】【友】【谊】【的】【珍】【惜】【。】【另】【外】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【主】【题】【也】【较】【突】【出】【,】【从】【文】【章】【中】【我】【们】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【时】【间】【在】【不】【停】【地】【变】【化】【,】【但】【不】【变】【的】【是】【开】【头】【的】【一】【句】【话】【:】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【。】【这】【就】【暗】【合】【了】【主】【题】【变】【与】【不】【变】【之】【间】【的】【对】【立】【关】【系】【,】【同】【时】【各】【段】【不】【变】【的】【“】【友】【谊】【是】【一】【弯】【虹】【桥】【”】【这】【句】【话】【也】【突】【出】【了】【本】【文】【的】【中】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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